According to methodology and result and discussion my professor give feed back about it and the work you've done with me not professional like i thought i thought you are very aware about what i ask for and you are very aware about writing research so please i want my previous writer to editing what my professor wants and i will send all the document i send it before many times to be in the middle of my study and you should ware that my research not about relationships between doctors or about senior doctors its about the beginner doctors whom are not good in English language and please just concentrate about my course design for improve their writing and please include me with exam that i can finally give it to my students who are juniors doctors to prove that i give course and evaluate my students .