compare / contrast essay

Paper details:
it is a compare / contrast essay. there is a movie named The Box https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AKAKnx6j1GU and i have a story which is similar to the movie i would like you to compare and contrast between the movie and the story method of eliminating wordiness: 1. eliminate unnecessary determiners and modifiers 2. change phrases into single words 3. change unnecessary that, who, and which clauses into phrases 4. avoid overusing expletives at the beginning of sentences 5. use active rather then passive verbs 6. avoid overusing noun forms of verbs 7. reword unnecessary infinitive phrases 8. replace circumlocutions with direct expressions 9. omit words that explain the obvious or provide excessive detail 10. omit repetitive wording