Communicate better, knowing that good communicators make better managers
Compose an electronic effective bad news message(email)for one of your employees, mentioning that he /she will not get promotion this year. Please consider all the bad news guidelines as well as the principles for writing effective emails , while composing the message.(5 Marks)
Part II:
- Suppose you bought a new mobile phone from XYZ Ltd Company. The phone is not functioning properly. Write a claim letter to a company asking them to compensate you for the defective mobile phone. (2.5 Marks)
- Now, assuming you are the claims supervisor in XYZ Ltd company, what communication channel would you choose and why? (2.5 Marks).
Sample Answer
Part I: Bad News Email for Promotion Denial
Subject: Performance Review and Development Plan
Dear [Employee Name],
Thank you for your dedication and hard work over the past year. I recently completed your performance review and appreciate your contributions to the team.
While we recognize your achievements in [mention specific accomplishments], we have decided to hold off on your promotion for this year. Our current business priorities and organizational structure require us to make some strategic adjustments, and unfortunately, we do not have an open position that aligns with your current skillset and career goals at this time.
However, I want to emphasize that this decision is not a reflection of your performance, but rather a reflection of our current business needs. We are committed to your professional growth and development within the company.