Why must Pixar tell this story and what is the moral message of your chosen short film?

 

Why must Pixar tell this story and what is the moral message of your chosen short film?

Why must Pixar tell this story and what is the moral message of your chosen
short film?

Please, please, please, do not use or copy anything from any outside sources (please,
no plagiarism). I don‘t want any plagiarism, I am only asking you to edit my essay (I am
not a native American, and English is not my first language). if there are grammar
mistakes in my thesis, then edit them out but PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT create or
change my thesis statement. The essay that I provided as an attachment is 1000 words
(including the works cited), and when you finish it should be 1000 words (exactly,
please).

Hello, I want you to edit my evaluative essay so that it will have the following things:

1. The introduction paragraph needs to capture the reader’s attention more.

2. I need better transitions, and the progression of my ideas need to be more
thoughtful-

3. Make sure to add transitional phrases to my essay(l will provide a chart for you to
use)

4. I need the sentence variety to be effective, edit out any unclear/ awkward phrasing
or sentence. The diction needs to be more effective.

5. Please change all my passive voice sentence into the active voice (don’t add new
ideas change my ideas from the passive voice into the active voice)

6. No errors in punctuation, capitalization, spelling, incorrect or inconsistent verb
tenses, run-ons, or fragments-

7. Some points I have made in the body paragraphs need to be more in-depth or
elaborated upon with more details, examples, or explanation.

8. Make sure/double check that my works cited is written in the right format.

9. Please edit my conclusion so that it restates the things I mentioned in the previous

find the cost of your paper